I wanted to make a note of her descriptions throughout the book, to refer to when designing her character. Thought i'd put them up on here in case anyone else finds it interesting too! :)
'Her hair was yellow and her face was yellow because she had been born in India and had always been ill in one way or another.'
'... she was as tyrannical and selfish a little pig as ever lived.'
"Mary has the most unattractive ways I ever saw in a child."
"My word! She's a plain little piece of goods!"
"If she were not so sallow and had a nicer expression, her features are rather good. Children alter so much."
And then we begin to see her alter:
'She was thinking that the small plain face did not look quite as sour at this moment as it had done the first morning she saw it.'
"... tha's got child's blood in thy veins instead of sour buttermilk. Tha's skipped red into thy cheeks..."
"Tha's a bit fatter than tha' was an' tha's not quite so yeller. Tha looked like a young plucked crow when tha' first came into this garden."
"She's begun to be downright pretty since she's filled out and lost her ugly little sour look. Her hair's grown thick and healthy looking and she's got a bright colour."
I've enjoyed drawing these but I'm attempting to simplify my style yet further and I feel like they could be a bit less fussy still. Plus 'sickly Mary' has definitely lost a bit of character in this coloured version in comparison to the sketches. That can be a pain sometimes, trying to continue that spontaneous feel, even in the more thought-out pieces!
More soon :)